Zirconian Fleets [BFG]

[dragonlord]

Yes I had been thinking that Alcaresh needs a bit of refinement. I'll do what I can about the writing style, I think part of the problem is that I tend to write much as I speak and I do have a somewhat rambling manner of speach, as I'm sure you've noticed.

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Edit: Updated the background, particularly Alcaresh, but also a few other bits, see first post.

[Adam]

I had another look at your new Alcaresh background. It works much better now, even though you didn't so much change it as rephrase it. Good stuff.